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Heart R.I.P by =jump-button:iconjump-button:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Macabre & Horror

©2009 =jump-button
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heart dies it not the end of the world just less pain

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=Vampiressartist Aug 18, 2009, 2:34:53 PM
Very, VERY adorable. I really enjoy work that is obviously dark and macabre-looking, but also very adorable at the same time. I'm not sure if I have much to critique, since the simple, adorable style is done quite well here. I sometimes see work that tries too hard to be dark, and ends up looking hackneyed and uncreative. But you pulled it off well.

If I had to say something critique-y (if that's a word ^^;), I'd say that the shading under the guy is pretty scribbly. Maybe it could've been neater by using straight lines to convey a shadow, or perhaps even cross-hatch.

But overall, good job :)
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~Zero-X-Z Jul 20, 2009, 9:27:24 AM
awesome really cool

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"Soul watched as his meister ran off and disappeared around a corner and into the city. He stood there in a daze; not wanting to move for fear that the feeling will fade. He never wanted the warm feeling that Maka Albarn gave him to ever go away.."
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*Bombshell93 Jul 20, 2009, 9:29:57 AM
awesome!
and the way you drew the char is cute :3
very nice ;)
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~Angelicgospel Jul 20, 2009, 9:37:26 AM
cute but deadly how empty and sad

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Everyone has a talent...just keep practicing to discovered it and master it.
Gospel XD
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~xoxheartlessxox Jul 20, 2009, 11:07:28 AM
I love the lil' spider handing off her hair |D
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~SilentManiac-Killer Jul 20, 2009, 11:12:26 AM
This is adorable! I love it. I like the emo/goth chibi style.

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In a society where people are killing themselves from the idiotic so called "improvements" and the stupidity that has grown inside humanity, what is there not to hate?
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~13lue13lood80 Jul 20, 2009, 12:41:41 PM
So Cute! :heart:

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"It is frequently the tragedy of the great artist, as it is of the great scientist, that he frightens the ordinary man."
-Loren Eiseley

"Art is the stored honey of the human soul, gathered on wings of misery & travail."
-Theodore Dreiser
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~black-cat16 Jul 20, 2009, 3:45:18 PM
it's simple but awesome picture, I love it's gloomy mood!

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Fuck being a princess! I want to be a vampire!
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I don't drink cheap wine!
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PISZĘ POPRAWNIE PO POLSKU!
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~MegaSquishy Jul 20, 2009, 4:20:16 PM
its so creative o.o

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:bulletpink::bulletpurple::bulletblue::bulletgreen::bulletyellow::bulletorange::bulletred::bulletorange::bulletyellow::bulletgreen::bulletblue::bulletpurple::bulletpink:
Forever and No Matter What
:heart::heart::heart:

Gimme Chocolate!!:pepsi:
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